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Poetry Challenge Day 2: Learning a Poem's Rhythm

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Poetry Challenge Day 2: Learning a Poem's Rhythm

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If you’re joining us in memorizing Edna St. Vincent Millay’s “Recuerdo” this week, you probably already have the first two lines stuck in your head. (If you’re just discovering the Poetry Challenge, please check out yesterday’s introduction. It’s never too late to start!)

We were very tired, we were very merry 

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We had gone back and forth all night on the ferry. 

Ken Burns, filmmaker

Once you’ve got these, you’ve learned a third of the poem, since this repeating couplet functions as a mini-chorus at the start of each stanza.

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That refrain tells the story in a nutshell. But this poem is more than just a report on one night on the ferry. It recreates the voyage through a flurry of sensory details, embedded in strikingly stylized language.

Those features — the imagery and the sound; what your mind’s eye sees and your physical ears hear — are what make “Recuerdo” a poem, and paying attention to how they work can help us learn it.

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“Recuerdo” is a whole mood. Weary and buoyant, the poem captures how it felt to be on that boat. You can see the sky turning color as the morning air breezes up.

And the sky went wan, and the wind came cold, 

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Joy Harjo, poet

You can taste the fruits of the voyage.

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And you ate an apple, and I ate a pear, 

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Tia Williams, novelist

Strain your ears just a little, and you can make out the sounds of boats in the harbor.

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And the whistles kept blowing, and the dawn came soon. 

Kevin Kwan, novelist

These impressions — and the vividness of Millay’s language — can help anchor the poem in your mind. But the secret to fixing it in your memory is to learn its structure, to listen to the musical patterns of its language.

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Poetry is older than writing, and many of its features originated as aids to memory in an oral, pre-literate culture. It’s easier to find the word you’re looking for if you know it sounds like the other words around it. Rhyme, alliteration and rhythm are not only pleasing to the ear; they’re sticky.

Each line of “Recuerdo” is a poetic wave that breaks on the shore of a rhyme.

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It was bare and bright, and smelled like a stable 

But we looked into a fire, we leaned across a table, 

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Reginald Dwayne Betts, poet

Rhyme is just one of the ways poets use repeating sounds to make their work memorable. Alliteration is another, and the English language has a fondness for it that goes back to its earliest literature. In the part of the poem we just heard, clusters of consonants in the middle of the lines knot them together and help you hold on to them.

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It was bare and bright, and smelled like a stable 

But we looked into a fire, we leaned across a table, 

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Ayad Akhtar, playwright and novelist

The poem’s individual words and syllables bob like a string of harbor buoys. Every line is propelled by the cadence of stressed and unstressed syllables. Our ears hear four heavy beats.

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We were very tired, we were very merry 

We had gone back and forth all night on the ferry. 

Jennifer Egan, novelist

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This pattern of rhythm and sound — four-beat lines yoked in rhyming pairs — is a familiar one in English. You may have encountered it before you could read, depending on your exposure to Dr. Seuss:

Every Who down in Who-ville liked Christmas a lot

But the Grinch, who lived just north of Who-ville, did NOT!

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Dr. Seuss, “How the Grinch Stole Christmas!

Songwriters are fond of it, including Joni Mitchell:

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Rows and floes of angel hair

And ice cream castles in the air.

Joni Mitchell, “Both Sides Now

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If you paid attention in English class, you might know it from Andrew Marvell:

Had we but world enough and time

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This coyness, lady, were no crime.

Andrew Marvell, “To His Coy Mistress

As these examples suggest, there’s a lot of variation within the basic pattern — longer or shorter lines, snappy or languorous pacing, playful or wistful emotional effects. Every voice will find its own music. This isn’t math or science, it’s art.

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The variation is partly a matter of meter. This is the most technical part of poetry, with its own special jargon, but it’s also intuitive and physical — it lives in the bobbing of your head or tapping of your foot as you read.

A foot, as it happens, is what a unit of meter is called, and while most English poems (including “Recuerdo”) have varying feet, many have one that dominates, keeping time like a bass drum. In this poem, Millay often places her strong beats after two unstressed syllables: da-da-DUM. But like any good poet, she achieves both consistency and variety. In some lines, the syllables land like hammer blows:

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And the sky went wan, and the wind came cold, 

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V. E. Schwab, novelist

In others they spatter like raindrops:

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We hailed, Good morrow, mother! to a shawlcovered head, 

Jenna Bush Hager, TV host and noted book lover

Words are more than sounds and syllables. They communicate emotion and meaning. The words in “Recuerdo” form a bouquet of arresting images and sensations, an experience that will be different for each reader. And even though, for the purposes of memorization, we have pulled apart some of the components of the poem, you can’t really separate sound from sense, or feeling from structure. They all happen at the same time, and work together to create something that resists summary. The poem is its own explanation.

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What does a bucketful of gold look like to you? What face do you see when the shawl-covered head turns to acknowledge your greeting? As you answer these questions, you take possession of the poem. It becomes part of you.

Today’s game will help with that process. See how many of its words you already have!

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Your task for today: Practice the rhythm.

Question 1/3

Fill in the missing words.

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It was bare and bright, and smelled like a stable 

But we looked into a fire, we leaned across a table, 

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Tap a word above to fill in the highlighted blank. Need help? Click “See Full Poem
& Readings” at the top of the page.

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Edited by Gregory Cowles, Alicia DeSantis, Nick Donofrio and Joumana Khatib. Additional editing by
Emily Eakin, Tina Jordan, Laura Thompson and Emma Lumeij. Design and development by Umi Syam and
Eden Weingart. Additional design by Victoria Pandeirada. Video production by Caroline Kim.
Additional video production by McKinnon de Kuyper. Photo editing by Erica Ackerberg. Illustration
art direction by Tala Safie.

Illustrations by Hannah Robinson.

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Audio of “Recuerdo” from “Edna St. Vincent Millay in Readings From Her Poems” (1941, RCA); accompanying
photograph from Associated Press.

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Gillian Flynn’s ‘Gone Girl’ Is the Best Thriller of the 21st Century. Here’s How It Gets Inside Your Head.

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Gillian Flynn’s ‘Gone Girl’ Is the Best Thriller of the 21st Century. Here’s How It Gets Inside Your Head.

Gillian Flynn’s “Gone Girl” was voted the best thriller of the 21st century in our recent poll. If you haven’t read it yet, you can start right here: We’re going to be looking at only the first three paragraphs, without giving away any secrets. And if you have read the book, it’s worth marveling at how Flynn grabs your attention and gives you the willies.

Not by revealing very much. A chapter heading states that the narrator is someone named Nick Dunne. We don’t know who this Nick is or what he’s like, and he’s not in a hurry to tell us. Here’s how he introduces himself in the opening passage:

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When you think of your favorite thriller, you always think of the beginning.

Some writers plunge you right into the middle of the action, peppering you with names, places and vivid details.

Here’s Dan Brown, kicking off “Angels & Demons”: “Physicist Leonardo Vetra smelled burning flesh, and he knew it was his own.”

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And here’s the beginning of Attica Locke’s “The Cutting Season”: “It was during the Thompson-Delacroix wedding, Caren’s first week on the job, that a cottonmouth, measuring the length of a Cadillac, fell some 20 feet from a live oak on the front lawn, landing like a coil of rope in the lap of the bride’s future mother-in-law.”

But other, equally masterly thrillers ensnare you in a butterfly net of indirection and innuendo, creating a mood of uneasy suspense without supplying much concrete information. That’s Flynn’s M.O.

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It works in movies too, though not exactly the same way. In her screenplay for the 2014 film adaptation of “Gone Girl,” directed by David Fincher, Flynn condensed the opening lines and emphasized the violence of Nick’s thoughts. In Ben Affleck’s tobacco-rasped baritone, he says he pictures “cracking her lovely skull” while the camera gazes upon Rosamund Pike’s blond, unblemished cranium. We’re not so much in his mind as in their bed.

Movies, even psychological thrillers as deft and atmospheric as “Gone Girl,” take place in literal, visual space. Fincher’s opening shots supply important facts about the characters and the setting, a stressed-out industrial town in the middle of the Great Recession. True to its source, the movie is full of twists and surprises. It’s cold, scary and sometimes appallingly funny.

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The novel shares those qualities, but it also operates in a more intimate, human register. The story is anchored in the consciousness of its characters; we see it all through the fog of their desires, dreams and delusions. They’re smart people who make dubious, sometimes disastrous choices.

We start out with Nick’s version of things. Later, we’ll hear from Amy, gaining the kind of access to her mind that her husband can only fantasize about. The maelstrom of their marriage, once the stormclouds burst, is a classic and convoluted he said/she said story.

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The key to the novel’s power lies less in what they say than in how they say it — as if they are confiding in us, telling deeply held secrets, trusting us to be on their side, or at least to hear them out.

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In those first pages, you can almost feel Nick’s hand on your shoulder as he muses on the mysteries of his wife’s skull. In real life, you might be plotting your escape, nodding politely and stepping away. “Gone Girl” reverses that magnetism. What should repel you draws you nearer. The book gets into your head, and under your skin.

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Do You Know These Greek Plays and Poems That Were Turned Into Movies?

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Do You Know These Greek Plays and Poems That Were Turned Into Movies?

Welcome to Great Adaptations, the Book Review’s regular multiple-choice quiz about printed works that have gone on to find new life as movies, television shows, theatrical productions and more. With ancient Greek texts back in the cultural conversation — thanks to the new film based on Homer’s “Odyssey” — this week’s challenge highlights screen adaptations of other Greek plays, poems and histories. Just tap or click your answers to the five questions below. Scroll down after you finish the last question for links to the works and their screen versions.

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Which Version of the ‘Odyssey’ Should You Read?

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Homer’s “Odyssey” has been translated into English countless times, with versions ranging from contemporary and accessible to highly poetic. A.O. Scott, critic at large for The New York Times Book Review, breaks down three translations and explains which one might be right for you.

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