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How CT scanners are being used on trading cards: The ethical and legal issues it presents

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How CT scanners are being used on trading cards: The ethical and legal issues it presents

NORTON SHORES, Mich. — There is nothing outside that suggests the machines sitting inside this gray, nondescript building in an industrial office center could disrupt the trading card industry.

Sign your name on the clipboard just past the entrance. Walk by a long table with pizza boxes next to a refrigerator and it all feels pretty normal. It’s not until you turn the corner and see millions of dollars worth of machinery in an open space flanked by a giant American flag on the wall that it starts to feel different. When you’re asked not to take certain pictures or video because of the required privacy of inventory nearby, yeah, that’s when everything changes.

There could be airplane parts. Pieces of a satellite. Rocketry. Military ballistics. And on a recent Friday afternoon, an unopened Mega Box of 2023 Donruss Optic Football cards with Anthony Richardson and Brock Purdy on the front, bought at a Detroit-area Meijer for $60.

The goal? To use the technology at Industrial Inspection and Consulting to see what’s inside without breaking the plastic wrapping that traditionally indicates an unsealed, untouched and unexamined package of cards.

For most of its history, buying and selling packs and boxes of trading cards was a game of chance with neither the buyer nor the seller knowing the results.

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“The product is designed to be a mystery,” said Keith Irwin, the general manager of Industrial Inspection and Consulting.

And if it wants to stay that way?

“They’ll need to find new packaging solutions,” he said.


IIC went from a company focusing primarily on industrial X-rays and CT scans within the medical and aerospace fields to potentially taking the cover off the trading card industry without taking the cover off any product at all. And in the process, they say, their company — with no prior connections to the trading card industry — has earned thousands of satisfied customers in the collectibles space. All electing for a sneak peek at their cards before tearing the packs or boxes open, circumventing the mystery that has long been a central element of these products.

The service caters to high-end products manufactured by Topps, Panini and Upper Deck, with the technology best suited to reveal cards in densely packed configurations. Take a 2023 Panini Flawless Football First Off The Line case for instance. Each case comes with two boxes. Each box comes with one pack of 10 cards. At $15,000 a case, it certainly makes economic sense that collectors are willing to pay IIC the going rate of $650 per case of that product to get a CT scan and see whether there’s something inside that they want, or to keep the package sealed and sell it on to someone else.

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The economics are easy. But the ethical dilemma isn’t for this group of non-collectors in western Michigan whose industrial scanning start-up has received a financial windfall from those in the hobby willing to pay for a preview.

“We’ve had to wrestle with that as a team and some of us think differently about it,” Irwin said. “So some of us say ‘It is what it is. We can do it (scan products).’ And others say, ‘This feels like we’re participating in something that is very much in a gray area.’ And we still wrestle with it. I think where we land is that we are data people and we’re very good at what we do. And if we’re not doing it, then somebody else will.”

Nick Andrews, co-host of the Sports Card Madness podcast, has been one of the more prevalent online commentators addressing the practice of CT scanning since IIC opened its doors to the trading card industry in late July. He’s been loudly expressing how this could be a significant concern within the hobby.

“I think ultimately they took the stance of Napster in a way, like they’re not committing fraud,” Andrews said. “What these people do with these CT scan(ned) cards is not their problem. You know, they’re not the shepherds or steward of the hobby.”

IIC’s website states, “Pandora’s box is open,” which is an interesting choice of words considering the controversial practice involves not opening the sports card box at all.

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“I think that you can probably draw a lot of correlations to different industries that have been negatively impacted by a group or a large number of groups that figure out a way to get an edge,” said Zach Stanley, CEO of WeTheHobby, one of more prominent online card dealers and box breakers (the practice of opening boxes of cards in larger quantities after customers buy the rights to all the cards of specific teams, players, etc. that may come out of them) within the industry. “I also think my hope is that it is something that can be combated from a technological standpoint, but we’re obviously a ways off from that now.”

And with the CT scanning technology comes the increased possibility for questionable resale practices at best and fraud at worst.

“I’d strongly encourage collectors to buy from established shops they trust,” said Eric Doty, CEO of Loupe, a live streaming platform for online vendors. “The short-term gain you’d make from scanning is not worth the risk of losing your entire business due to breaching that trust.”

Stanley said WeTheHobby has been approached by other contacts within the industry to explore or be helped to explore CT scanning technology. He immediately followed up saying, “Obviously we rejected (the offer) quickly.” But not every seller stands on equal ground, or possesses an equal moral compass.

“When people get desperate they do desperate things,” Stanley said.

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A 2000 Bowman Chrome Tom Brady rookie card as seen through the CT scanner. (Image provided by Industrial Inspection and Consulting)

It all began over lunch and a search for Charizard. The start-up industrial scanning company was looking for ways to market its capabilities and a brainstorming session led to the idea of scanning packs of Pokemon cards. Compared to airplane parts, scanning packs of cards was child’s play.

“It was like a revelation of ‘Holy cow! Not only did this work, but it’s extremely obvious,’” Irwin said. “That was really the extent of what we thought. So hey, let’s throw it up as a case study.”

Irwin said he posted the imagery and results on his LinkedIn page in late June, where it received “140 or 150 likes and tons of comments.” The company had no idea what it stumbled upon.

“Immediately we were like well nobody’s gonna be paying for our labor to be able to do this,” Irwin said. “But I think that that was a naive thought because we didn’t understand the true value of these cards.”

The values of sports and Pokemon cards have grown exponentially in recent years, with regular sales in the six-figure range and some going well into the millions (the highest sale to date for a Pokemon card was nearly $5.3 million in 2022 and the highest sale for a sports card was $12.6 million, also in 2022).

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Irwin said the company began receiving emails from parties interested in having products scanned following the post on social media. He estimated it only took a week and a half from there to turn it into a “full flooded service.”

“We laugh that you have rocket components sitting on one shelf and then cards on the other shelf,” Irwin said. “It’s just odd.”

Irwin estimated the volume of product IIC has scanned since starting in July to be “in the thousands.” Though that’s still just a drop in the bucket for an industry that produces millions of packages of cards each year.

Now months into what’s gone from lunch room chatter to a sizable portion of Industrial Inspection’s income, what’s the biggest technical challenge for scanning thick paper and cardboard?

“How do we go fast enough to make it worth it for people to pay,” said Irwin, who told The Athletic on Wednesday the company has hired additional full-time staff to help with the card demand.

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And what’s become the biggest non-technical challenge entering an unfamiliar niche space?

“It’s a moral dilemma,” Irwin said.

There have been threats. A window near the front of their building is covered. They’ve taken steps to protect themselves from those in the collectibles business who believe what they’re doing is morally wrong and a serious threat to a billion dollar industry.

“I think it’s certainly a disruption (in the industry). … First of all, for boxes that were produced before today, I think as a potential buyer of those boxes you have to be very cautious,” Professional Sports Authentication (PSA) CEO Nat Turner said in a recent interview on the Sports Card Madness podcast. “Basically you have to assume the box has been scanned. So I think you can see a price correction in boxes that are thrown up on eBay, for example, perhaps. But I think manufacturers I think are going to have to respond.”


The CT scanner loaded up with a box of football cards. (Photo: Craig Custance)

There’s been rampant speculation within the hobby long before IIC existed around card vendors using CT scanners to view inside card packs and boxes. Many times online accusations occur when box breakers unveil what some within the hobby would deem a disproportionate amount of “hits” from sealed products with a break.

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Irwin said the company has seen verified proof that “many sources” are already scanning products and have been doing so without being public about it. (No proof was offered to The Athletic for this story.) IIC was the first one openly offering the service for certain price points, which is part of its moral defense. It believes it’s being very transparent about all of this. Its price list is on the website. So are pictures of the scans. IIC invited The Athletic in to see how it all works in person, an invitation that was accepted.

The company specifically quotes prices for high-end products (boxes priced around $1,000 or more, generally) manufactured by Topps, Panini, Upper Deck and Pokemon on its website, whose homepage essentially doesn’t promote the service at all other than an initial announcement near the bottom of the page. There’s a focus on cards from the last 25 years or so containing foil, raised portions, imprinted numbering and patches or relics (cards containing pieces of jerseys or other memorabilia) since those elements are the most defined on the scans.

Pricing varies per product. For example, IIC charges $75 for one box of Topps Dynasty, which is one of Topps’ premier products containing only one autographed patch card encased in a plastic holder and carries a retail price anywhere from $900 to $1,200, depending on the sport or year.

“Dynasty is our favorite, I’ll say that,” Irwin said. “It’s probably the easiest to detect, I’m guessing. It’s a single (package), it’s one to two cards, typically one card. It’s just a dream, and those are very expensive products. We sent out a quote to somebody with a Dynasty box, and they’re like, ‘God, this is a no brainer, I’m sending it over.’”

A patch autographed card numbered to 10 of Formula 1 star Max Verstappen from 2022 Topps Dynasty (image below) serves as one of IIC’s prime scanning discoveries. The card displayed by IIC last sold on eBay for nearly $2,200 on Aug. 3 according to CardLadder, which tracks sales across major online marketplaces.

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When asked if card manufacturers like Topps and Panini have reached out to discuss the company’s scanning practices, Irwin said, “Any conversations like that are under non-disclosure, but we have spoken with a variety of interested parties that are leading the market. So I’m not just talking manufacturers — auction houses, authentication houses, third-party services that are like couriers, you name it. Pretty much anybody that is interested has either spoken to us or spoken to people that know us.”

Fanatics Collectibles, the owner of Topps, declined an interview for the story. But people inside Fanatics Collectibles told The Athletic: “While we believe that CT scanners aren’t currently being widely utilized, we take any issue that potentially harms collectors very seriously. As such, we are working on innovations and solutions to address the issue.”

Panini declined to be interviewed for this story. Upper Deck said it would look into the possibility, but never agreed to an interview. Goldin Auctions and parent company eBay declined an interview for the story, deferring the issue to individual sellers. The Athletic also reached out to four other prominent online vendors who never responded to interview requests.

When asked if the conversations with other parties involved a request to discontinue scanning products, having products scanned or ways to hinder the ability to reveal the contents of a product through scanning, Irwin said, “All of the above.”

“That’s an interesting question because it seems like publicly everybody wants us to stop,” Irwin said. “In private, nobody wants us to stop because everybody that you can imagine has reached out to us.”

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There’s also no way to know whether a pack or box has been scanned without the person or company divulging that. There’s no database kept by IIC for what’s been scanned, nor is there an indicator placed on the product to show it’s been scanned by IIC.

Additionally, the company doesn’t know the true identity of everyone sending in products to be scanned.

“We’re not verifying our clients,” Irwin said. “A lot of them we assume are using fake emails. And so we don’t know who they are. Fake emails, fake names, and then we use Square for credit card processing. So we don’t know who any of these people are, honestly.”

Irwin said the company hasn’t looked into any instances of nefarious practices by individuals, box breakers, hobby shops or anyone else using IIC’s services once a scanned product leaves its hands.

“Our objective position is one of scientific ability and data-driven results,” according to IIC’s website. “It is not our responsibility to determine the ethical positions and choices of others and we do not accept responsibility for their actions. Our quotes require clients to disclose to their potential buyers if they have CT scanned their sealed products.”

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The consequences from IIC for a customer failing to disclose to a potential buyer that a product was scanned is unclear. Legally speaking, that’s a different story.

Paul Lesko, a Missouri-based attorney known for being “The Hobby Lawyer,” said while scanning packs and boxes may be legal, consumer fraud charges could result for the owner of scanned products if resold without disclosure.

“Consumer fraud claims require a knowingly false representation about a product made with the intent for buyers to rely on that misrepresentation,” Lesko said. “So, if a seller scans a pack/box and determines it does not have a hit (industry parlance for a desirable/valuable card), but when selling states it ‘could contain an auto(graph) or patch’ or really just recites that the boxes ‘may contain an auto or relic’ or just shows a picture of the box with that representation from the manufacturer, that’s a false representation made by the seller in the hopes of duping the buyer.

“Best case scenario, after scanning a pack/box, if you’re going to resell it, disclose you scanned it.”

Irwin posed the question that anyone in the hobby would ask, though.

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“Are people going to do that? I have no idea,” Irwin said.


Irwin was handed the box of 2023 Donruss Optic football cards, our attempt to see just how effective his technology was and the first thing he did was turn to YouTube. He wanted to learn more about a product in which he was unfamiliar since most people weren’t spending $75 to scan a $60 box of cards.

He landed on a video of a breaker sorting through each card individually. Immediately, he was able to determine that his machines wouldn’t be able to pick up the names of each player on the cards because of the design. But he was confident in the ability to pick up the outline of the players along with any uniform numbers, important indicators when searching for specific hits. He also expressed confidence in the ability to identify numbered cards and patches.

So we moved on to the next step.

A few feet away, a giant XTH 320 X-ray machine sat, waiting to reveal what was inside this box of football cards. Irwin placed the box in the middle of the machine on a round table on top of a piece of styrofoam. A large sliding door closed slowly, sealing itself next to a red emergency stop button and a caution sticker. Within minutes, the contents of the box of cards showed up on a monitor near the machine, each card a blurry gray rectangular shape that revealed little, until the outline of a patch on one of the cards became clear.

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About 20 minutes later, the CT scan was complete. Irwin was able to rotate the scan in every direction. He was able to zoom in on specific cards. It was abundantly clear that the bottom pack contained the patch card, which he was then able to rotate and zoom in on to identify more characteristics of the card.

If we knew the specifics of a card we were trying to get, at that point we would have been able to identify it. But in the case of this patch card, we only could make out vague details. There was some writing on the front. It appeared to be a wide receiver with a number in the 80s. Just as important was identifying what wasn’t in the box. There didn’t appear to be any numbered cards. If we wanted to spend the time, we likely would have been able to determine there wasn’t a C.J. Stroud.

Once opened, the patch card turned out to be Raiders tight end Michael Mayer. A 10-minute scan of the contents was enough to conclude this wasn’t a particularly valuable box, which ended up being confirmed when it was later opened the old-fashioned way. By a 13-year-old ripping through foil.


The Michael Mayer patch card detected by the scan. (Photo: Craig Custance)

It wasn’t a fast process. There was a lot of card rotating and data reading. To truly benefit, there needs to be a target card in which the person doing the scanning can be on the lookout for. It’s tedious work on expensive equipment, one reason Irwin isn’t convinced the work is going to spread throughout the industry.

“You saw me scrolling through this data, it’s annoying, right?” Irwin said. “We were a startup hungry for work. We’re all workaholics without enough work. So we stumble upon this thing that nobody’s done before and all of a sudden we have… clients in a brand new territory.”

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It’s transformed his business. Whether it alters another just might depend on what happens next.


There is a train that runs past the industrial complex where these scans are taking place, blaring its horn each morning while crossing a nearby road. It’s close enough that the shaking it produces in the building can disrupt scans that rely on complete stability for pinpoint accuracy.

The slightest vibration can get in the way of an accurate scan and that realization has helped this same group design a solution. IIC has patented a process that would make the scanning much more challenging.

“All (new packaging) has to do is introduce a slight vibration to the cards and it makes it very challenging for us to read it,” Irwin said.

The company hopes its solution would either be licensed or outright purchased by a card company.

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“It would be strange to both want to be the fixer and then also the breaker,” Irwin said. “But in the conversations we’ve had, we’ve been compared to say Google wanting to hire the hacker to go through their systems, find loopholes, find ways in.”

But that still leaves every unopened product in the world made up to that point unprotected.

Geoff Wilson, a prominent YouTuber and owner of Cards HQ in Georgia, said in a video posted last week that he believes the CT scanning topic is an overblown issue for most collectors. He immediately followed up, though, saying certain types of collectors and investors should be “terrified.”

Wilson pointed to high-end sealed wax boxes that people have held onto for years as being an issue. He went so far to say he’s in the process of selling off older sealed boxes he’ s collected because “people will forever be concerned that this box was CT scanned” and the concern will only grow over time.

“I mean because of the moral gray, I think the best thing to do would be to eventually find a way to stop this, move out of it,” Irwin said. “What does that do for the last 25 years of product that is prime for CT scanning? I don’t know.”

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So there lies the dilemma for the industry. The biggest problem isn’t that this is happening on a small scale. It’s that it’s creating distrust amongst consumers on a potentially larger one.

“Once you sow that distrust with the consumer, you’ve got bigger problems,” Stanley said. “I think that right now, educating the consumers on the fact that this is happening is going to enable them to be educated and prioritize who they are buying from. I think the resale market right now for sealed wax is going to become increasingly problematic.”

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(Top image: Industrial Inspection and Consulting, Craig Custance, Bruce Bennett/Getty Images, Mark Cunningham/MLB Photos via Getty Images; Design: Meech Robinson)

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Judith Barnard, a freelance writer who stumbled on a second career as a best-selling author at 50, when she teamed with her husband, Michael Fain, a onetime aerospace engineer, to publish a potboiler novel under the pen name Judith Michael, died on May 6 in Chicago. She was 94.

Her death, at a hospital near her home, was caused by heart failure, her daughter, Cynthia Barnard, said.

Combining their first names to create the pseudonym Judith Michael, the couple published 11 commercially successful novels over the years, starting with “Deceptions,” an out-of-nowhere hit, in 1982.

Equal parts romance and thriller, “Deceptions” concerned identical twin sisters — Sabrina, a globe-trotting socialite living in London, and Stephanie, a suburban Illinois housewife — whose fleeting experiment with swapping lives proved to be less fleeting than expected.

Entertaining, yes. A Kirkus review called it “a strenuously inventive, big-budget” romance.

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High literature? Not so much. The same review described the book as “glossily seamless nonsense” but noted its potential as fodder for a TV movie — an observation that proved prescient when NBC adapted it in 1985 as a two-part mini-series with Stefanie Powers, of “Hart to Hart” fame, playing the twins.

Then again, their plan had never been to give Thomas Pynchon a run for his money.

Ms. Barnard had already taken a stab at a literary career, publishing her first novel, “The Past and Present of Solomon Sorge,” in 1967. An introspective tale about a Midwestern university professor whose wife of 30 years abruptly abandons him, the book sold only a few thousand copies, leading Ms. Barnard to turn to freelance work on educational films and textbooks, as well as writing articles for Chicago magazines and newspapers.

Her literary horizons expanded after she married Mr. Fain, her second husband, in 1979. “We were looking for something we could do together,” she recalled in a 1991 interview with The Chicago Tribune. “Michael had written technical articles and liked the process but hadn’t found a field he was happy in.”

They began by writing articles about marriage and family for newspapers and magazines, including Good Housekeeping and Redbook. “We had such a good time working together that one day Michael said, ‘Enough of this! Why don’t we write a book?’” Ms. Barnard recalled in a 1999 interview with The Ledger of Lakeland, Fla.

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“Deceptions” concerned identical twin sisters whose fleeting experiment with swapping lives proved to be less fleeting than they expected.Credit…Simon & Schuster

With “Deceptions,” they discovered a winning formula that they employed with many of their following books — what they called universal fantasies, about ordinary, if strong-willed, people who, by a stroke of fate, escape a quotidian existence to taste a life of wealth and adventure, only to face unforeseen challenges along the way.

In “Possessions” (1984), for example, a Vancouver mother of two, whose shady businessman of a husband vanishes, begins a glamorous new life as a jewelry designer in San Francisco, only to fall in with the wealthy family that he had concealed from her.

Similarly, in “Pot of Gold” (1993), a Connecticut housewife must learn for herself whether more money really does mean more problems after she wins a $60 million lottery.

Like their characters, Ms. Barnard and Mr. Fain found their lives transformed by unexpected success. As novel after novel climbed the best-seller lists, they traveled the world to research their books and divided their time between a spacious 16th-floor apartment overlooking Lincoln Park in Chicago and a second home in Aspen, Colo.

The couple’s 1993 novel told the story of a Connecticut housewife who wins a $60 million lottery.Credit…Poseidon

Also like their characters, they learned that success can be complicated — in their case, because it required juggling the usual pressures of marriage with the inevitable Lennon-McCartney-style tug of war that comes with creative collaboration.

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As Ms. Barnard told The Ledger, “It’s very difficult to have a working relationship with this person who you think has done really dumb things that day and is going to be in your bed.”

Judith Goldman was born on Feb. 17, 1932, in Denver, the elder of two children of Samuel Goldman, who owned a shoe store, and Ruth (Eisenstat) Goldman.

After her parents divorced when she was a child, her mother married Harry Barnard, a prominent historian and biographer, and moved with her children to Chicago.

The family temporarily relocated to Ohio when she was in high school, and she graduated from Fremont Ross High School in 1949. She earned a bachelor’s degree in English from the Ohio State University in 1953. The same year, she married Jerre Papier, an electrical engineer. They divorced in 1970.

She met Mr. Fain by chance at a hospital, where both were visiting his ailing mother, a friend of Ms. Barnard’s. “Bittersweet times, as Michael’s mother was dying and we were falling in love,” she told The Ledger.

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Once the couple decided to bet on a publishing career, there was no turning back. “We burned all our bridges, both quit our jobs, lived on our savings for one year,” Ms. Barnard said in a 1997 interview with The Oklahoman newspaper of Oklahoma City.

The couple’s 1984 novel focused on a Vancouver mother of two who reinvents herself after her husband, a shady businessman with a hidden past, vanishes.Credit…Simon & Schuster

“We didn’t know how hard it would be,” she added. “We just thought it would be wonderful to work together. And it was, after a while.”

In addition to her daughter, Ms. Barnard is survived by Mr. Fain; her son, Andrew Sharpe; five grandchildren; and a brother, David Barnard.

It helped that the couple adhered to a strict division of labor. After what could be months of plotting and laying down a basic outline together, Ms. Barnard then did the writing, while Mr. Fain served as the editor.

“He’s a superb one,” she said in a 1988 interview with The Houston Chronicle. “And sometimes a harsh critic.”

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Each book might require five or six drafts, with endless fiddling. When the inevitable disagreements arose, Mr. Fain, an amateur photographer, would disappear into his darkroom to cool off, he told The Ledger, while Ms. Barnard headed to the kitchen to “knead bread and take out her aggressions.”

Then again, their shared career also proved a marital blessing.

As Ms. Barnard once put it, “It probably kept us married because we always had a book to finish.”

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Closed-Door Romance Books That Will Make You Swoon

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As a lifelong fan of romantic comedies, my list of favorite “sweet” romances is extensive.

Not because I have a spice aversion — but because the rom-coms I love most, with that classic cinematic vibe, often come with fewer peppers on the spice scale.

Some people refer to these books as “closed door.” I prefer to think of them as “in the hall” romances (though that admittedly doesn’t roll off the tongue quite the same way). The reader is there for all the swoon, the burn and the banter — but when things head to the bedroom, the reader remains out in the hallway. With less focus on what happens inside the boudoir, all that juicy heightened tension and yearning really shine. Here are a few of my favorites.

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SEEK THE TRAITOR’S SON, by Veronica Roth


I read Veronica Roth’s new novel for adults, “Seek the Traitor’s Son,” over one weekend and had a hard time putting it down, and not just because I was procrastinating on my house chores.

There’s much about the novel one would expect from Roth, the author of the Divergent series, one of the hottest dystopian young adult series of the 2010s. Thematically, the novels are similar. Like “Divergent,” this new book is also set in an alternate, dystopian version of our world; it is also packed with vivid, present-tense prose full of capitalized labels to let you know that something different is going on; and it also centers on a classic “Chosen One” who is burdened by the mantle of savior she carries.

These are classic tropes, but I, like many other genre fiction fans, enjoy that familiarity. Still, I’m always hoping for a subversion, a tornado twist that sucks me into imagination land.

In “Seek the Traitor’s Son,” our Chosen One is Elegy Ahn, the spare heir of the most powerful woman in Cedre. Elegy likes her life, even if it’s filled with danger. See, some time ago, a virus took over the world. The contagion is strange: Everyone who is infected dies, but 50 percent of the people who die come back to life with mysterious cognitive gifts.

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After the outbreak, Earth split into two factions: The dominant Talusar, who worship the Fever, believe it is a divine gift, willingly infect themselves with it and consider anyone who does not submit to it a blasphemer; and Cedre, a small country made up of everyone who rejects the virus and the dogma around it. They are, naturally, at war.

Early in the book, Elegy, solidly on the Cedre side, and Rava Vidar, a brutal Talusar general, are summoned by an order of prophets who tell them: One of you will lead your people to victory over the other, and one of the deciding factors involves an unnamed man whom Elegy is prophesied to fall in love with.

Elegy doesn’t want this. But the prophecy spurs the Talusar into action, and so her mother assigns her a Talusaran refugee as a knight and forces her into the fray as the Hope of Cedre.

If that seems like a lot of setup, don’t worry. That’s just the first few chapters. Besides, if you know those dystopian novel tropes, you’ll get the hang of it. Roth gets through the world exposition quickly, and after a rather jarring time skip, the plot takes off, effectively and entertainingly driving readers to the novel’s exhilarating end.

The strength of “Seek the Traitor’s Son” is Roth’s character work. Elegy is a dynamic heroine. She has a lot to lose, and she leads with love, which is reflected in the intense grief she feels for the people she’s lost in the war and the life the prophecy took from her. It’s love that makes her stop running from her destiny and do what she thinks is right to save the people she has left.

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Many authors isolate their characters to back them into bad decisions, so it’s refreshing that Roth has given Elegy a community to support her. Her sister Hela in particular is a treat. She’s refreshingly grounded, and often gives a much needed reprieve from the melodrama of the other characters’ lives. (She has an important subplot that has to do with a glowing alien plant, but the real reason you should pay attention to her is that she’s funny, loves her sister so much, has cool friends and listens to gay romance novels.) Hela and Elegy’s unwavering loyalty to each other casts a positive illumination on both characters.

My favorite character is Theren, Elegy’s knight, who is kind and empathetic to everyone but himself. As the obvious romantic lead, his character most diverges from genre standard because of the nuanced depiction of his trauma. He has been so broken by his experiences that he thinks what he can do with his body is all he can offer, and it’s worth nothing to him.

But like I said, I need subversion, and for all the creative world-building, I didn’t quite get it. The most distinct part of the novel was the setting and structure of alternate Earth, as well as the subcultures born from that setting. But after ripping through the novel, I found that those details didn’t provide nourishment for thought, and the general handwaviness of the technology and history of Earth was distractingly easy to nitpick.

I am a greedy reader, so I want my books to have everything: romance, action, an intellectual theme, novel ideas about the future, and character development. “Seek the Traitor’s Son” comes close. The novel is the first in a series, and I’m willing to hold my reservations until I read the next book. Elegy and Theren are worth it.


SEEK THE TRAITOR’S SON | By Veronica Roth | Tor | 416 pp. | $29

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